"Intense and exciting enough to grab an audience’s attention right away!"
July 2, 2017 - My original TV pilot script 'Soaked' received its feedback from the international screenwriting competition BlueCat Screenplay
"Your cold open was strong. It was tense and exciting enough to grab an audience’s attention right away, and it was funny and bizarre enough to hold their attention through to the end of the scene and the start of the episode. An audience is going to be instantly invested in watching the episode, if only to find out why Pen was on the bow in the middle of a storm screaming about there being no whales. To read more Click Here